I love the style you're doing this in. The illustrations are working really well. Are you going to show the animated scenes from the phone screen or will the phone be animated as well? It would be cool to see the phone go through a series of actions as the day goes on, maybe it's dropped or something, while the animations stay on the screen. Im excited to see where you take it!
Great start with content building, however it seems a bit static with just the same frame changing on the screen. Perhaps sound will add an interesting dynamic however.
I like the idea alot! maybe you can have each illustration be represented as a picture with a time of day near the top middle to help with the transition idea from frame to frame. I think the music you decide on too will help alot with its progression.
Hi Katie, I've seen a lot of progress throughout this project. Your work ethic is amazing, I love how much content building you have in this work, and still make the illustration speak for it self. My only suggestion would be the yellow background color abruptly show in the screen while the rest background is white, maybe make it cohesive? love it by the way!
Hi Katie, I've seen a lot of progress throughout this project. Your work ethic is amazing, I love how much content building you have in this work, and still make the illustration speak for it self. My only suggestion would be the yellow background color abruptly show in the screen while the rest background is white, maybe make it cohesive? love it by the way!
It may just be my screen, I'm not sure if you meant it or not, but there is an odd film-grain in the scene that seems out of place. Otherwise I'd say keep going in the direction you're going, adjust the pacing to be a little more organic, and it'll be on its way.
I love the style you're doing this in. The illustrations are working really well. Are you going to show the animated scenes from the phone screen or will the phone be animated as well? It would be cool to see the phone go through a series of actions as the day goes on, maybe it's dropped or something, while the animations stay on the screen. Im excited to see where you take it!
ReplyDeletereally cute, it might be kind of long with all those story lines tho, maybe try and spead it up alittle
ReplyDeleteGreat start with content building, however it seems a bit static with just the same frame changing on the screen. Perhaps sound will add an interesting dynamic however.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea alot! maybe you can have each illustration be represented as a picture with a time of day near the top middle to help with the transition idea from frame to frame. I think the music you decide on too will help alot with its progression.
ReplyDeleteHi Katie, I've seen a lot of progress throughout this project. Your work ethic is amazing, I love how much content building you have in this work, and still make the illustration speak for it self. My only suggestion would be the yellow background color abruptly show in the screen while the rest background is white, maybe make it cohesive? love it by the way!
ReplyDeleteHi Katie, I've seen a lot of progress throughout this project. Your work ethic is amazing, I love how much content building you have in this work, and still make the illustration speak for it self. My only suggestion would be the yellow background color abruptly show in the screen while the rest background is white, maybe make it cohesive? love it by the way!
ReplyDeleteIt may just be my screen, I'm not sure if you meant it or not, but there is an odd film-grain in the scene that seems out of place. Otherwise I'd say keep going in the direction you're going, adjust the pacing to be a little more organic, and it'll be on its way.
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